krotki tekst po angielsku

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mam nadzieje, ze nie tylko niemiecki tak dobrze znacie :D prosze o sprawdzenie

Dangerousing Tornado

Some day I woke up and like always I went to school. Everything was O.K. When I ate my breakfast, special program about weather was on TV, but I wasn't watching it.
Tornado happened on Saturday 17th of August. I was at my grandmother's house. I was there with my grandparents and their dog-Lana. I was shopping with my grandfather and after I was eatting lunch before it happened.
When it started I was looking at the window and I was observing tornado. Other people were running to (swoich) houses. The situation was very frightening, because everything were in an air and was very windy. I was afraid but I with my grandparents hiding in basement.
After this incident people crying and shouting. I felt tired and frightened, but I was also happy, because my all family lived. Then I drove to hospital.
Pewnie ktos sie znajdzie, kto umie na tyle, zeby poprawic.
A dlaczego nie zwrocisz sie do ludzi na forum angielskiego obok?
Tam jest z pewnoscia kilku specjalistow.
forum angielskiego obok? ja nie widze :(
popatrz na flagi po prawej stronie, mniej wiecej w polowie monitora. Wystarczy kliknac na odpowiednia flage :-). Jak jestes uzytkownikiem formum niemeickiego, to tez automatycznie twoja nazwa uzytkownika i haslo funkcjonuja na angielskim formum (n o na innych francuskim, hiszpanskim i wloskim)
Albo jeszcze prosciej:

https://www.ang.pl/
dZIEKI ;*
Your welcome! :-)
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